Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that they find the most interest. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Deciding the numbers of subjects for students to concentrate on is being a topic to discuss these days. While some of them believe that youngsters should learn all school subjects, others debate that they only have to focus on what they’re really good at and what attracts them the most. To my point of view, I approve of the former
one
. In
this
essay, I will discuss both views and point out my opinion.
To begin
with, almost all state schools are now providing students with several compulsory subjects and fields It’s very necessary for learners if they can do their best to study all of the subjects which included in the educational program
.
Accept space
.
The combination of subjects can offer them a wide range of basis knowledge
.
Accept space
.
Furthermore
, it may lead to the variety of social and specific skills, what they really need for themselves after graduating from school. Being well-rounded may help them a lot to adapt in the society easier.
However
, to concentrate on all of these subjects
require
Suggestion
requires
students to be attempted and make
effort
Suggestion
an effort
as much as how hard it is according to the numbers of subjects at school.
On the other hand
, some adolescents are suggested to choose only
one
or
few subjects
Suggestion
a few subjects
basing on their hobbies and abilities
.
Accept space
.
This
one
may be a better way for them to study
more comfortably
Suggestion
more comfortable
and no longer be pressured. It will be more beneficial for students to focus only on what they are proficient in
,
Accept space
,
due to their best results and performances in their specialised fields. They don’t have to spend too much time on what they dislike and
this
can lighten their pressure to choose their specialities in the future. But
this
choice can
also
turn out to be the negative
one
that they may have less opportunities and choices for their career in the future society. In conclusion, I still believe it will be better for teenagers to grow up with elementary training and skilled to become more well-rounded. The choice of studying all the subjects enables teenagers to widen their mind and discover their new interests as well.
In
Suggestion
On
higher stage of studies
,
Accept space
,
they
can be mature
Suggestion
can mature
enough to be aware of what is specialised for them
base
Suggestion
based
on their talents and experiences.

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