Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

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Delivering a message to the society would be a dream for a many

individuals but

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individuals, but

due to the interference of

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

, a group of innovative people

find

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finds

it difficult to establish their personal views. On the one hand, it is obvious that most of the governments are keen on promoting national unity among their nation, but movies or songs are a vital platform for a person to trier cultural clashes within the people. To be precise, an

indivigual

a human being

individual

part of a particular

religon

a strong belief in a supernatural power or powers that control human destiny

religion

or culture with hate on other

religons

a strong belief in a supernatural power or powers that control human destiny

religions

religion

will generate media that directly discriminates other cultures and eventually

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would wreak havoc upon the residents of nations.

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, as the materials are generated by the talented artists are viewed by members of all groups, it is essential for the authorities of the country to observe and place barriers according to their content.

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, contents like porn, sexual violence and graphic contents are factors that play an important role

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development

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the development

of today’s youth.

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, many citizens of the state are not aware of the flaws that goes within the administration of the country.

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, a part of the community will be concerned with alerting the local people regarding the political strategies through images or video

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clips, but

the involvement of a nation’s authority would prevent

these

denotes a person or thing

this

from occurring.

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, some inhabitants are finding it difficult to share their views due to the fear they have in their local administrations. In conclusion, it will be

benefical

promoting or enhancing well-being

beneficial

population

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the population

is allowed to display their ideas without any obstacles, but when considering the advancement of the nation and ensuring the peace among, the people It is a must to place restrictions.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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284 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Freedom of expression
Censorship
Artistic integrity
Cultural identity
Social responsibility
Public order
Discrimination
Hate speech
Self-regulation
Government intervention
Vulnerable groups
Creativity
Democracy
Fundamental right
Moral obligation

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