Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which type of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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is an

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when every working individual takes a break from work and gets paid for the services they have done for their company. Some sociologists believe that having a fixed

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age

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for everybody irrespective of their occupation is unfair, and certain workers should allowed to take early superannuation. I completely agree with

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argument and I will indicate my view with examples.

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with, people tend to become weak as they grow older. Different occupations demand different kinds of skills. Certain workers need physical strength to perform their duties.

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physical strength and stamina, reduce with

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. While other occupations like office work demands less physical energy.

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, workers whose job demand more physical energy needs to be given an early

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.

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can be illustrated by the workers in coal mine whose work demands strength and stamina which deteriorates as they grow older.

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, workers sitting in a library do not need to have much physical power.

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, people who have served a lot for an organization for a longer duration could be given early superannuation. Certain workers who have dedicated most of their life working for an organization should be allowed to reap the benefits of

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at an early

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.

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, my father started working for a company in India at the

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of 20. He was allowed to take early

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by considering the tenor of his job in the company. In conclusion, having a common

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age

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for all kinds of workers is unfair. Workers whose job demand more physical energy and workers who have served their corporation for a longer duration should be allowed to take early superannuation.