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Exports of an country between the year 2015 an 2016

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The given bar graph describes the values of exports of various goods in one country during the years 2015 and 2016. A table is
also
 given which tells us about the change in the percentage of exports between the years 2015 and 2016. From the graph, it is clear that petroleum products contribute the most to
country's exports
Suggestion
the country's exports
, whereas the textile contributes the least to it. Even though
this
 is the case, we can see the rapid growth of the
export
 value of 15% from textiles from 2015 to 2016. While there is very marginal increase in
export
 values of agricultural products and petroleum products with an increase of 0.81% and 3 %, respectively. What is interesting to find is that the gems and jewellery sector is the only sector where we can see a decrease in the
export
 profits by 5.18%. In conclusion, we can see steady growth in the
export
 values of the country from 2015 to 2016. Even though we can see a decrease in the gems and jewellery
export
, we can see a significant improvement in textiles and even though a marginal, yet a steady improvement in other goods.

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