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What are the causes and effects of water pollution?

#effects #water #pollution
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Water
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 performs a primary role in our health. It's obvious that
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 contaminate by harmful substances,
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 is getting more and more polluted due to our activities.
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 polluted due to contaminants is not preferred for human use. There are many causes of
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pollution
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, but humans are the main cause, which forced researchers to study the effects of
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 phenomenon on earth. A huge amount of garbage from households and agricultural land and other commercial places is dumped into lakes and rivers. These wastes contain harmful chemicals and toxins which creates poisonous and damages the aquatic flora and fauna. Many people perform their domestic activities like bathing, washing clothes and utensils. Oil spilled from ships and tanks is hugely responsible for polluting the sea
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. As the oil floating on the
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 surface, it prevents the flow of oxygen into the
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.
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, industrial wastes are discharged into the
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 leading to
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pollution
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. Unquestionably, consumption of
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 polluted
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 leads to diseases and many negative effects
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 as stunning plant growth, cholera and diarrah
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frequent and watery bowel movements; can be a symptom of infection or food poisoning or colitis or a gastrointestinal tumor
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e must seriously think over to execute some steps to stop or at least decrease
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pollution
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. Industrial wastes must be treated before disposal into
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 by waste
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 treatment plants. Any domestic activities like bathing and washing clothes should be banned. We should teach individuals about the harmful impacts of
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pollution
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. We must force the law to prevent people and factories from polluted
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. Use television and adverts to send a message to those who pollute
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 and to let them know about the effects of
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pollution
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. Moderate the
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 use and don't leave the
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 running when you are not using it. Try to recycle everything as possible as you can. Because plastics and papers undoubtedly, are harmful for
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 and can cause
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pollution
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.
Water
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 has played a pretty much noticeable part in our life on earth, it covers more than 70% of the surface of the earth, so it's crucial the we look into the study of
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 so if we didn't take a proper measures to stop
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pollution
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,
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 major resource will be unfit for human use and will cause an enormous effect on our health.

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