Too much attention is paid to and too much money is spent on keeping pets, while people throughout the world are starving. - Discuss the arguments for and against keeping pets. - To what extent do you agree?

These days, pets seem to attract more and more attention and much money from people. There is nothing to discuss if it does not have
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
debate about
this
problem. Some say
pets
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Pets
is taken
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are taken
have taken
take
are taking
care too much at both physically and mentally aspects whilst starvation is
happening
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Happening
all around the world. In
this
essay, I will look at both sides of the argument
and
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And
give my opinion. On the one hand, keeping pets have
benefit
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benefited
in many ways.
Firstly
, to their owners, pets
bring
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Bring
a lot of fun and help people reduce stress.
Secondly
, to the community, create a
new
used of a living language; being the current stage in its development
New
job market
such
as selling pets’ accessories and food.
This
is a potential environment
for
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For
everyone who
want
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wants
to earn more money.
Lastly
, to the
pets
a writer of poems (the term is usually reserved for writers of good poetry)
poets
themselves, food and
others
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Others
like wash, toys are always available for them.
On the other hand
, there are still many disadvantages. If the owners do not take care of
their
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Their
pets carefully, they can go out and bite neighbours,
this
is the most dangerous thing
because
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Because
some pets can cause serious diseases. Another drawback is that pets often lack of
freedom
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Freedom
and survival skills. One more thing, in developed countries as Japan, America
dosmetic
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Domestic
Dosmetic
animals are given better food to eat than poor people and
that is
the reason why
some
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Some
against keeping pets. In my opinion, keeping pets bring people
such
many good things, it
teachs
impart skills or knowledge to
teaches
touches
teach
us
responsibility
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Responsibility
, kindness and attentiveness. But people
should got
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should get
another think coming
before
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Before
spending lots of money on a pet while people over the world are dying of hunger. In their hard time, we ought to open our heart and give them the best things we could give.

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