Too much attention is paid to and too much money is spent on keeping pets, while people throughout the world are starving. - Discuss the arguments for and against keeping pets. - To what extent do you agree?

These days,

pets

seem to attract more and more attention and much money from

people

. There is nothing to discuss if it does not have some debate about

this

problem. Some say

pets

is

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taken care

too

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of too

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much

at

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apply

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both

physically

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and

mentally

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aspects whilst starvation is happening all around the world. In

this

essay, I will look at both sides of the argument and give my opinion. On the one hand, keeping

pets

have benefit in many ways.

Firstly

, to their owners,

pets

bring a lot of fun and help

people

reduce stress.

Secondly

, to the community, create a new job market

such

as selling

pets’

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pet’

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accessories and food.

This

is a potential environment for everyone who

want

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to earn more money.

Lastly

,

to

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the

pets

themselves, food and

others

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like

wash

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,

toys

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and toys

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are always available for them.

On the other hand

, there are still many disadvantages. If the owners do not take care of their

pets

carefully, they can go out and bite neighbours,

this

is the most dangerous thing because some

pets

can cause serious diseases. Another drawback is that

pets

often lack

of

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freedom and survival skills. One more thing, in developed countries

as

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Japan,

America

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and America

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dosmetic

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domestic

animals are given better food to eat than poor

people

and

that is

the reason why some

against

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are against

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keeping

pets

. In my opinion, keeping

pets

bring

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brings

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people

such

many good things, it

teachs

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teaches

us responsibility, kindness and attentiveness. But

people

should

got

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another

think

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coming before spending lots of money on a pet

while

people

over

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the world are dying of hunger. In their hard time, we ought to open our

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heart

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and give them the best things we

could

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give.