For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and Math. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skills be made as fourth skill to the list. To what extent do you agree?

Skills needed by the employers keep on changing.
Hence
,
education system
Suggestion
the education system
needs to evolve. Reading, writing and maths
has been
Suggestion
have been
the most important pillars and with the advent of computers, there have been arguments to make
this
the fourth pillar. I agree with
this
view.
However
,
this
could have some negative effects on the children. Computers can impact the cognitive abilities of the children. It offers a great range of applications in the fields of reading, writing, calculations etc. The use of
such
applications at an early age can prevent kids from attaining the basic knowledge of communication and calculation.
For example
,
instead
of learning tables and performing calculations with their minds, they rely on the calculator application.
Similarly
, with the applications
such
as spell
checker
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check
checking
etc., kids refrain from learning the correct words and grammar.
On the contrary
, it has become very important to gain computer skills these days. IT sector has become a big sector in the whole world, which generates millions of jobs every year.
Thus
, there are better job opportunities for people with the professional computer courses.
Furthermore
, most of the government institutions and companies rely on the computers for their work.
For instance
, in India, you can apply for passport online and get an appointment. Even the employees use computers to scan the documents, fill the applicant related data, print the
reciept
the act of receiving
receipt
etc.
Therefore
,
this
is a must have
skill irrespective
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skill, irrespective
of the work sector. To conclude, even though computers may hamper the
cogniyive
of or being or relating to or involving cognition
cognitive
abilities of a child, there is no doubt that it has become must for us to include
this
skill in the education system.
This
will enable kids to get jobs.

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