many people spoil natural beauties like sea ,beaches ,mountains and lakes .do people responsible for that ?what should be done to stop people to spoil natural beauty ?give the reasons and examples for your answer.

Sea, beaches, mountains and lakes are most beautiful components of nature. But many people who spoil the natural beauties of sea, beaches, mountains and lakes. In my view point, I think, many people are
also
responsible for making it less beautiful.
This
natural components like sea, beaches, mountains and lakes are tourist place. Daily so many kinds of people went there for spending times with family and friends. Some people have concerns and manners to how to deal with
this
natural place, but some people
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do not have
does not have
any sense and concerns about natural beauties of
this
place. They throw all chip packets, cane and others useless stuff in anywhere without using any dusting box. Sometimes children destroy the decorations of
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this place
these places
this places
which make less attractive towards tourists.
However
, It is our responsibility to keep clean and beautiful.
Such
as, if we use a dustbin to throw all kinds of packets, plastics, bottles and many other useless things
then
it will keep clean and attractive towards tourists. And it's
also
our duty to protect all decorations and attraction from children and any kind of situations.

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