An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individual and companies shopping online .

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Nowdays
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Nowadays
, People are influenced by the online shopping which is increasing.
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online Shopping has several
advantages but
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advantages, but
it has some disadvantages for
identify
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identifying
the products. In my opinion, Company online shopping is one of the easiest
way
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ways
to get the products in the short
time
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. To
begain
take the first step or steps in carrying out an action
begin
bargain
began
with, company online shopping is better for the
time
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consuming.
some
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Some
time
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we did not get enough
time
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to go shop that
time
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we place the order in online.
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, sometimes
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
forget to
shopping
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shop
when
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
come back from my office so
that is
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why its help me
lot
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a lot
. Individual shopping online
is
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is also providing
has also provided
also provides
also
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provide us
better
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the best
price
.
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.
when
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When
we are browsing online that
time
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we see different type of products which is cheap.
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, there are
also
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more individual pages where we can compare the price. In example,
last
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time
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time, although
although
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i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
was buying a mobile phone from companies
site but
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site, but
the price was very low
in
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on
individual shopping site
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the individual shopping site
.
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, quality is the Major issue
in
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with
companies online shopping site
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the company online shopping site
company online shopping site
company's online shopping site
.
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, in their catalogue sometimes they are presenting good quality image of the
products but
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products, but
physically that are not same.
Moreover
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,
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
when we order some grocery item that
time
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we figure out some quality issue.
Many
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Much
of Individual online shopping
have
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has
no
licsence so
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licence, so
licence so
license so
licensee so
that’s why they cheat with customers.
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, individual online
sometime offer
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sometime offers
the fake news
also
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send fake product.
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, some individual online shopping sites only prefer to pay
first
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after delivery in that case maximum people cheated by online. In conclusion, online shopping is very
poplure
regarded with great favor, approval, or affection especially by the general public
popular
people
around the world. Though
its
the thing named or in question
it
is very easy to
shopping
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shop
without
moving but
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moving, but
we
can not
can not
cannot
figure out the products without seeing think it is better for us to buy from online
shopping
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shops
because it will provide us free delivery in
short
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a short time
time
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.

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