Some people believe that it is good idea to express their point of view and ideas through social media however other believe opposite do you agree or disagree

One of the most distinct
quality
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qualities
which actually differentiates the humans from animals is their ability to communicate with their fellows.
Although
other species do communicate through different sounds and signals, but none of them use any language for
communication
, which is the most effective and efficient way of
communication
. Since ages,
communication
is divided into two classes know as written
communication
and the verbal
communication but
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communication, but
the medium we used to transmit our ideas and
view point
a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
, are still evolving with time.
Initially
people use letters and human messengers to convey their messages
, these method not
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, not these methods
, these methods not
only require
lot
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a lot
of efforts and formalities but
also
very time consuming. In current centaury which is known as the “Modern Era” these
communication
medium
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media
becomes very fast and have global reach.
This
essay totally agrees with the view that social media is a very effective medium of expression your views as it’s not just
fast but
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fast, but
also
spread
you
of you or yourself
your
message to the global community with the blink of an eye.
Similarly
, there are much lower restrictions and censorship issues involved in broadcasting ones view to
general public
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the general public
as compare to print or electronic media.
Lastly
, there is nearly no cost and very standard equipment required for using social media sites as
compare
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compared
to electronic and print media where costs are significantly higher. Despite all these advantages some people still believe that social media has its disadvantages as well, as these sites are not strictly regulated and could be used for criminal activities because one can easily hide his or her identification on social media by creating fake accounts.
This
point is
also
valid but
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valid, but
on
larger scale
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a larger scale
if we do a cost
benefits
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benefit
analysis as we did in
this
article, we can easily conclude that the benefits associated with
use
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the use
of social media
is
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are
much higher than cons related with it.

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