The role of a library in keeping books is obsolete. So universities should use digital media. What is your opinion? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Library
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The library
is the collection of numerous books of different categories.
Teacher
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The teacher
A teacher
can't teach the entire subject in the
classrom
a room in a school where lessons take place
classroom
, students need to refer textbooks and many reference books to procure the knowledge. Nowadays, technology plays a significant role so that,
majority
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the majority
of the masses prefer to read
in
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on
smart mobiles, laptops, computers, tablets and other smart gadgets. According to me, I opine
universites
the body of faculty and students at a university
universities
, schools and colleges to utilise the internet and digital media along with the libraries. The following subsequent paragraphs will give a better insight into
pros
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the pros
and cons of
this
topic.
Instead
of carrying plenty of physical copies of books, it is
obsolutly
completely and without qualification; used informally as intensifiers
absolutely
pramatic
concerned with practical matters
pragmatic
to maintain a single weightless gadget which fits in our pocket. All those books which are available in
library
Suggestion
the library
libraries
, can be accessed from any part of the world through our mobile, if there is an internet connection.
Moreover
, size of pdf file and word file is less when compared to other audio and video files. Not only reading books, but
also
audio books are booming in
this
decade. Audio books, ease the task of a human being.
For example
, one of my friends revise the topics by listening these audio books in
last few hours
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the last few hours
prior to his examination.
However
, listening for
few minutes
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a few minutes
has enormous impact rather than reading for hours. On the contrast, usage of digital media
also have
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also has
a negative phase.
Although
it is preferable to use social media, it paves the way to
helath
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
isuues
prepare and issue for public distribution or sale
issues
if we
over
at any time
ever
use. It results in affecting
eye-sight
normal use of the faculty of vision
eyesight
and severe headache, if it is used for many hours. Digital media
has
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have
many issues so that
,
Accept space
,
people
also
read books in
Library
Suggestion
the Library
.
For example
, my sister who
spend
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spends
most of her time
infront
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in front
of
computer
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a computer
the computer
still
read
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reads
books when her eyes get stressed. To conclude, both online and offline reading is
to encouraged
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to encourage
in
universities so
Accept comma addition
universities, so
that, it is entirely student choice to opine the mode of study.
Moreover
,
universties
the body of faculty and students at a university
universities
should maintain and update the book resources and should provide access to students so that, they can
procoure
get by special effort
procure
knowledge from
any where
at or in or to any place
anywhere
in the college.
Although
digital world is booming in
this
decade, certain individuals still visit the library to study in that atmosphere.

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