International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

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International

tourism

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overcome

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will overcome

many challenges and today it reached to an enormous development. Countries focusing on

tourism

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, as one of the major

source

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sources

of income. It pushed

continents

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the continents

to countries, all over the

world

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to build a better infrastructure, in a way to attract more foreign tourist.

Couple

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A couple

decade

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decades

ago, western countries were major players in leisure and

tourism

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. Asian countries

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as Dubai, Thailand, Malaysia are major players in recent days. To

analyze

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analyse

the changes, we need to take into consideration of multiple factors,

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as cost, saturated population in western countries and as

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still Europe got their own share in the industry.

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, international

tourism

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categorized into two major

division

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divisions

, leisure and business travel.

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one, prioritize on cost, safety and more activities and the

second

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one, obviously based on scope of requirement, irrespective of location.

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Additionally people

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Additionally, people

around the

world

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, visit particular country for events

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as football, cricket and

Olympics

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the Olympics

. To conduct

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events, country is developing infrastructure to accommodate population around the

world

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. Infrastructure development activities,

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deforestation which

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deforestation, which

led

animals

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the animals

to migrate, demolish mountains to build a broad road and

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actions have serious environmental effects. Cutting trees would reduce rainfall,

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lead to scarce

in water resource

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water resource

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, development activities always have good as well as bad impact. To overcome

such

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conditions, a clear road map to be developed. Deforestation

should be overcome

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should overcome

by planting trees, water resource always kept under monitoring and build

canal

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canals

to reroute water into a proper location,

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proactive plan would help to overcome

effect

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the effect

on nature.

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International

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an International tourism

tourism

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in today’s

world

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play

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plays

an important role in developing

country

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country's

economy and at the same time, environmental effects

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need to be seriously considered and preventive action helps to overcome

such

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issues.

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

enormous benefit
impact
local inhabitants
environment
disadvantages
outweigh
advantages
economic benefits
job creation
cultural exchange
infrastructure development
promotion
local products
environmental impact
exploitation
resources
cultural erosion
increased cost of living
overcrowding
congestion
balancing
benefits
disadvantages

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