International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

International
tourism
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will overcome
overcome
many challenges and today it reached to an enormous development. Countries focusing on
tourism
, as one of the major
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sources
source
of income. It pushed
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the continents
continents
to countries, all over the
world
to build a better infrastructure, in a way to attract more foreign tourist.
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A couple
Couple
of
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decades
decade
ago, western countries were major players in leisure and
tourism
. Asian countries
such
as Dubai, Thailand, Malaysia are major players in recent days. To
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
analyze
the changes, we need to take into consideration of multiple factors,
such
as cost, saturated population in western countries and as
such
still Europe got their own share in the industry.
Firstly
, international
tourism
categorized into two major
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divisions
division
, leisure and business travel.
First
one, prioritize on cost, safety and more activities and the
second
one, obviously based on scope of requirement, irrespective of location.
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Additionally, people
Additionally people
around the
world
, visit particular country for events
such
as football, cricket and
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the Olympics
Olympics
. To conduct
such
events, country is developing infrastructure to accommodate population around the
world
. Infrastructure development activities,
such
as
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deforestation, which
deforestation which
led
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the animals
animals
to migrate, demolish mountains to build a broad road and
such
actions have serious environmental effects. Cutting trees would reduce rainfall,
further
lead to scarce
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water resource
in water resource
.
On the other hand
, development activities always have good as well as bad impact. To overcome
such
conditions, a clear road map to be developed. Deforestation
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should overcome
should be overcome
by planting trees, water resource always kept under monitoring and build
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canals
canal
to reroute water into a proper location,
such
proactive plan would help to overcome
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the effect
effect
on nature.
Finally
,
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an International tourism
International
tourism
in today’s
world
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plays
play
an important role in developing
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country's
country
economy and at the same time, environmental effects
also
need to be seriously considered and preventive action helps to overcome
such
issues.

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