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Advertisements have become the most powerful and persuasive way to raise the sales of product some people think that advertisements promote consumerism however others think they improve the standard of living which view do you agree with.

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Nowadays,
water
 pollution is a major problem not only for environmental
activists but
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activists, but
also
 for all the people. Modern way of living contributes to
water
 contamination issue
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which affect people and the biosphere in a bad way. As it was mentioned earlier
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the life of our contemporaries influences the ecological situation.
For instance
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the more cars are used
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the more factories produce
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the more emissions interfere
to
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with
 the
water
 cycle. These emissions contain dangerous pollutant particles that
also
 have an impact on rainwater run-off. Filtration might seem as a possible solution
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but in fact
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it is not really viable
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as that large volumes of
water
can not
can not
cannot
 be purified.
As a result
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the
water
 table remains tainted as in Eastern Europe
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for example
. On the top of that
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we
can not
can not
cannot
 deny the fact that uncontrolled landfills are growing wider around the world
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and
this
 phenomenon causes waste dumping. Abandoned wastes can easily enter
water
 supplies through the ground.
Although
this
 issue is neglected
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there are some waste processing centres
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dwindling amount of trash, that can possibly be thrown into the
water
. Poaching is not the only thread for animal life
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the more severe is the effect of
water
 contamination. It leads to potential extinction
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habitat loss
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and food chain
disfunction
(medicine) any disturbance in the functioning of an organ or body part or a disturbance in the functioning of a social group
dysfunction
. Some animals
such
 as
Siberian tiger
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Siberian tigers
the Siberian tiger
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,
Amur leopard
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and
white shark
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the white shark
white sharks
 have already faced that effects. In that situation
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people are not
exception
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exceptions
the exception
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so in
the nearest
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the near
 future we might deal with famine due to
draught
a shortage of rainfall
drought
 seasons
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,
poisoned
water
 and the lack of irrigation. In conclusion
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it appears that the problem of
water
 pollution is even more principal than we think. If humans continue to exacerbate the situation
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both animals and people will have to accept
challenges
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the challenges
 of
this
 ecological disaster.
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