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International music events are a good way to create friendship between cultures. To what extent do you agree with this statement.

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Global music functions are a good method to
beget
a sum of money allocated for a particular purpose
budget
 friendliness amongst cultures. In my opinion, I agree that musical concerts breeds
socialibilty
 between different cultures.
Therefore
,
this
 essay will
further
expantiate
the act of increasing (something) in size or volume or quantity or scope
expansion
on
Suggestion
of
this
 view.
To begin
 with,
Universal musical function
Suggestion
the Universal musical function
are often conducted
Suggestion
is often conducted
 as concert where different Nationalities socialize together.
Therefore
,
this
 would create a friendly bond amongst them because contacts and social media handles could be shared between participants
thus
, a close relationship is developed.
For instance
, I have a Ghanian friend whom I met during a musical festival in Abuja.
Hence
, recently I travelled to Ghana for a program and my friend decided to host me.
In addition
,
world wide
involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope
worldwide
 gigs would promote business transactions amongst delegates of different Nations. Musical festival can serve as a gathering where business ideas could be shared amongst acquaintance.
Consequently
, ideas which are shared could breed international partnership. To illustrate, recently, Worship experience was held
at
Suggestion
in
Lagos Nigeria
Accept comma addition
Lagos, Nigeria
 and a participant met a Chinese delegate and they both shared investment ideas
thus
, business partnership emerged. In conclusion, musical festivals
builds
Suggestion
build
 friendship amongst citizens of different Nationalities because it promotes social bond and investment opportunities can be achieved.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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