Inspite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

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agriculture
also
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ve invented latest technology that speeds up and save a lot of time for farmers. Despite all the facts we are very well aware of the ratio of starvation that has gradually been increasing across the globe.In
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the latest technology
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