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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State with you consider to be the most effective: -Comics -Books -Radio -Television -Film -Theatre

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Every day, there are many ways to communicate a
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menssage
a communication (usually brief) that is written or spoken or signaled
message
,
this
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 can get to us for all our senses.
For example
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, if we watch TV, we use the eyes, for Radio, we use ear, and for books we use our eyes, smells, and imagination. For
this
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 reason I think that the
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menssage
a communication (usually brief) that is written or spoken or signaled
message
 that
book
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 want to express, it
stay
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stays
 with us for more time, because is more deep. In my opinion a
book
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 is the best way to avoid the reality, due to is very healthy and relaxing. When you read a novel, the
conection
a relation between things or events (as in the case of one causing the other or sharing features with it)
connection
 is more strong, and the best part is when you imagine how is the character or situation. Many times I heard about that
films
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film
 are inspired
in
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by
 books, and in general the opinions are that the
book
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 is better than the movie, I think
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happen
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happens
happened
is happening
 because when you create the situation in your mind is according to
experince
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
experiences
 of
live
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life
living
.
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, the only disadvantage of books is that there are very expensive in Chile, because here they have 19% of tax, but there are many public
library
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libraries
. Respect TV, I think is the most popular, but every day lost followers, since people believe that the most part of their message are fake.
This
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 is happening because people know that
in
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on
 TV there are many money, so
this
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mean
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means
 that in
this
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soport
an active diversion requiring physical exertion and competition
sport
spot
 will be a lot of interest, so their content doesn’t have credibility.
On the other hand
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, is the radio,
that is
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 very fast, but
such
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 as
many
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much
 information in
this
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 media, the audience cannot save all information and their
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menssage
a communication (usually brief) that is written or spoken or signaled
message
 is not effective. To sum,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 think the most effective media is the
book
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, because the
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menssage
a communication (usually brief) that is written or spoken or signaled
message
 is
save
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saved
 for more time.
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