More and more people are moving from rural areas to cities in search of a better life, but city life has its own problems. What are these problems? Suggest some solutions.

At the present time, an increasing number of people are moving from rural areas to urban
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Areas
areas
in order to find a better life, yet meanwhile,
city
life has its own issues. In
this
essay, I
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Will
will
analyse some relevant problems and suggest some solutions as well. It is obvious that issues in cities are complicated.
Firstly
, the large population in cities
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Has
has
led to
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the housing shortage
a housing shortage
housing shortages
housing shortage
.
For instance
, in many big cities, a large number of people have to
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Live
live
in
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the suburbs
suburbs
because the rent is too high in the
city
.
As a result
, these people must commute
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For
To
In
to
the
city
to work every day, which leads to the
second
problem –
traffic
congestion. Indeed,
traffic
jam has become a major concern in so many cities around the world. Take Shanghai as an example. If someone wants to drive from the eastern side to the western side
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In
in
Shanghai, they may spend six or seven hours on the road because of
traffic
congestion. The
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The third problem
Third problem
A third problem
third problem
is pollution. It seems that air pollution and water pollution are
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more severe
more severe in
a large and densely populated urban area; may include several independent administrative districts
Cities
cities
than in rural areas, and research has proved that overcrowded cities suffer from these
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Issues
issues
even more because of the large population.
Accordingly
, the solutions to the aforementioned issues should
also
be varied.
First
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And
and
foremost, the government should supply cheaper urban housing so that workers can
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Afford
afford
to live in cities.
For example
, Australian cities
such
as Adelaide and Perth have
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Government
government
housing in
city
centres in order to support low-income families.
Then
, the
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Government
government
needs to improve transport infrastructure and manage the volume of
traffic
.
This
is due to the consideration that there are always many commuters every day. Above
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All
all
,
city
dwellers must raise their awareness about how to protect the environment and live in
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A
a
sustainable way. That means everyone has to help cities to address
this
problem before
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The
the
damage caused by
this
trend becomes irreversible. To summarise, several problems are caused by the increasing population in urban
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Areas
areas
. I believe that we should take
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measures, including
measures including
providing
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affordable housing
affordable housing in
a large and densely populated urban area; may include several independent administrative districts
Cities
cities
, improving transport infrastructure and raising public awareness about an eco-friendly
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Lifestyle
lifestyle
to solve those disturbing issues.

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