In some countries people who visit art galleries are reducing. What are the reasons? How can this problem be solved?

In many nations, people display artefacts, that are unique, in the galleries.
, the number of people visiting
places is decreasing rapidly.
essay will
discuss the causes and provide solutions to bring the audience back. A major
something immaterial that interferes with or delays action or progress
which is stopping public to visit exhibitions is the
advancing or becoming higher or greater in degree or value or status
cost. Due to the increased cost of tickets, people are refraining from going to a local art gallery to avoid expenses. Another problem is that individuals feel that there are not many items exhibited to witness and appreciate. In India,
for instance
, a museum called
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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