In some countries people who visit art galleries are reducing. What are the reasons? How can this problem be solved?

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In many nations, people display artefacts, that are unique, in the galleries.

However

, the number of people visiting

such

places is decreasing rapidly.

This

essay will

further

discuss the causes and provide solutions to bring the audience back. A major

hinderance

something immaterial that interferes with or delays action or progress

hindrance

which is stopping public to visit exhibitions is the

raising

advancing or becoming higher or greater in degree or value or status

rising

cost. Due to the increased cost of tickets, people are refraining from going to a local art gallery to avoid expenses. Another problem is that individuals feel that there are not many items exhibited to witness and appreciate. In India,

for instance

, a museum called

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

96 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

digital era
online galleries
allure
economic factors
cultural pursuits
societal interests
innovative
engaging exhibitions
virtual reality (VR) experiences
accessible
contemporary
promote
art education
awareness
foster
appreciation

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