More and more people nowadays are buying fashionable clothes. Does it have a more negative or positive effects? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.

"Clothes maketh a man" have you heard of

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? It has been used all too often in order to give deliver the importance of dressing among the population. While

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topic is debatable to some.I personally believe that nobody should judge a book by

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

cover! I

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beleive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

that changes in a

persons

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person's

wardrobe

does

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more harm than good. We see that the general public is an easy target to lure, especially the so called

mellennials

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millennials

! The people from all parts of the

worls

everything that exists anywhere

world

love to ape the west, in both culture and dressing. In order to stay with the ever changing trends the fashion industry has to offer, we keep updating our wardrobe to please others.

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this

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does more harm to the planet than good.

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, all the clothes are using

increasing amount

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an increasing amount

increasing amounts

of non biodegradable material

nowadays which

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nowadays, which

poses a serious threat to our planet.

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we wear the most trending and designer

peices

a separate part of a whole

pieces

of clothing which

appeales

earnest or urgent request

appeals

appealed

to the eye, it

dosen't

does not

doesn't

hold much of significance if we

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don't have

a better habitat.

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is the one of the main causes the living conditions deteriorate in general.

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not all what we buy are in trend all the time

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so there is no use for certain clothes post a certain time period.

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: sweaters and jackets of a certain material post winter. In conclusion, I would like to impress upon people that even in my own experience of going down the same road

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such

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benefit was observed

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I have

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now shifted to

bio degradable

capable of being decomposed by e.g. bacteria

biodegradable

material to help save

mother

a woman who has given birth to a child (also used as a term of address to your mother)

Mother

Earth and her eco-systems.

sriya.92alan

Mar 4, 2020

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More and more people nowadays are buying fashionable clothes. Does it have a more negative or positive effects? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.

Your opinion

Creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in words pictures music or film in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option

Workers should get more weekend? Agree or disagree

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