More and more people nowadays are buying fashionable clothes. Does it have a more negative or positive effects? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.

"Clothes maketh a man" have you heard of
this
? It has been used all too often in order to give deliver the importance of dressing among the population. While
this
topic is debatable to some.I personally believe that nobody should judge a book by
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
it's
cover! I
also
accept as true; take to be true
believe
beleive
that changes in a
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person's
persons
wardrobe
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do
does
more harm than good. We see that the general public is an easy target to lure, especially the so called
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millennials
mellennials
! The people from all parts of the
everything that exists anywhere
world
worls
love to ape the west, in both culture and dressing. In order to stay with the ever changing trends the fashion industry has to offer, we keep updating our wardrobe to please others.
However
,
this
does more harm to the planet than good.
For instance
, all the clothes are using
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an increasing amount
increasing amounts
increasing amount
of non biodegradable material
Accept comma addition
nowadays, which
nowadays which
poses a serious threat to our planet.
Although
we wear the most trending and designer
a separate part of a whole
pieces
peices
of clothing which
earnest or urgent request
appeals
appealed
appeales
to the eye, it
does not
doesn't
dosen't
hold much of significance if we
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don't have
don'thave
a better habitat.
This
is the one of the main causes the living conditions deteriorate in general.
Secondly
Accept space
,
,
not all what we buy are in trend all the time
Accept space
,
,
so there is no use for certain clothes post a certain time period.
For example
: sweaters and jackets of a certain material post winter. In conclusion, I would like to impress upon people that even in my own experience of going down the same road
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,
,
no
such
benefit was observed
Accept space
.
.
I have
also
now shifted to
capable of being decomposed by e.g. bacteria
biodegradable
bio degradable
material to help save
a woman who has given birth to a child (also used as a term of address to your mother)
Mother
mother
Earth and her eco-systems.

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