More and more people nowadays are buying fashionable clothes. Does it have a more negative or positive effects? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.

"Clothes maketh a man" have you heard of
this
? It has been used all too often in order to give deliver the importance of dressing among the population. While
this
topic is debatable to some.I personally believe that nobody should judge a book by
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
cover! I
also
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that changes in a
persons
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person's
wardrobe
does
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do
more harm than good. We see that the general public is an easy target to lure, especially the so called
mellennials
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millennials
! The people from all parts of the
worls
everything that exists anywhere
world
love to ape the west, in both culture and dressing. In order to stay with the ever changing trends the fashion industry has to offer, we keep updating our wardrobe to please others.
However
,
this
does more harm to the planet than good.
For instance
, all the clothes are using
increasing amount
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an increasing amount
increasing amounts
of non biodegradable material
nowadays which
Accept comma addition
nowadays, which
poses a serious threat to our planet.
Although
we wear the most trending and designer
peices
a separate part of a whole
pieces
of clothing which
appeales
earnest or urgent request
appeals
appealed
to the eye, it
dosen't
does not
doesn't
hold much of significance if we
don'thave
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don't have
a better habitat.
This
is the one of the main causes the living conditions deteriorate in general.
Secondly
,
Accept space
,
not all what we buy are in trend all the time
,
Accept space
,
so there is no use for certain clothes post a certain time period.
For example
: sweaters and jackets of a certain material post winter. In conclusion, I would like to impress upon people that even in my own experience of going down the same road
,
Accept space
,
no
such
benefit was observed
.
Accept space
.
I have
also
now shifted to
bio degradable
capable of being decomposed by e.g. bacteria
biodegradable
material to help save
mother
a woman who has given birth to a child (also used as a term of address to your mother)
Mother
Earth and her eco-systems.
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