Write a letter to a tour agency and say Where did you see this advertisement? Explain why are you suitable for this job. Suggest how to improve your local area to attract more tourists.

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my interest

for

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the position of an English speaking

tour

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guide in your company '

Tour

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Travels' in reference to the advertisement in the Tribune on 15/03/2020. I have completed the

post graduation

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in History from Delhi

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, Delhi, and have

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apply

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excellent speaking and writing skills in English which are

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for your job to communicate with

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foreign tourists.

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, I have

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experience as a

tour

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guide in Star travel which is in Rajasthan and

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, I

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possess

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knowledge of all the

tourists

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places here.

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, the condition of most of the tourist places in our region is

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and

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need to be improved.I think

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should impose entry fees in order to collect the revenue, which in turn, can be used to

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preserve the infrastructure of these historic buildings.

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improvement in the architect and premises of ancient forts and museums will attract numerous tourists to these places. I hope that I

fulfill

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all the necessary credentials to be a

tour

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guide in your organisation.Hope to hear from you soon.

Yours'

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faithfully, Raghu

kajalmaan.16

Mar 4, 2020

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