Write a letter to a tour agency and say Where did you see this advertisement? Explain why are you suitable for this job. Suggest how to improve your local area to attract more tourists.

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my interest for the position of an English speaking tour guide in your company 'Tour Travels' in reference to the advertisement in the Tribune on 15/03/2020. I have completed the post graduation in History from Delhi university, Delhi, and have an excellent speaking and writing skills in English which are must for your job to communicate with the foreign tourists.
Furthermore
, I have an experience as a tour guide in Star travel which is in Rajasthan and
additionally
, I
also
possess in depth knowledge of all the
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tourist
tourists
places here.
However
, the condition of most of the tourist places in our region is pity and
this
need to be improved.I think
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the government
government
should impose entry fees in order to collect the revenue, which in turn, can be used to
further
preserve the infrastructure of these historic buildings.
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This
Thus
improvement in the architect and premises of ancient forts and museums will attract numerous tourists to these places. I hope that I
put in effect
fulfil
fulfill
all the necessary credentials to be a tour guide in your organisation.Hope to hear from you soon. Yours' faithfully, Raghu

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