Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime

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The laws, Judgment and punishments' strategy
differ
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differs
from country to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
, according to country's
community
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and religious background. In some Middle Eastern countries, the
punishment
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for the robbery is cutting the hand of the thief, regardless, any individual conditions
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, in some European countries, the judge and the juries take into their account the situation and the several conditions before declaring their decree. Which one is right between those two different points of view? The
First
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group who
defend
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defends
stating a fixed
punishment
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, in spite of, any other conditions. In their
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opinion
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opinion, this
this
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strict treatment
aids
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aid
to control the order in the
community
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and diminish the crimes. They cited their
opinion
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by the "law of nature". Since we are children, our elder taught as the idea of the
punishment
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and reward. If you
make
engage in
do
your homework, clean your room, and get high scores at school,
then
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you deserve your reward,
otherwise
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, you should be punished.
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folk of people
have
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has
the same strategy of thinking. If you are a good citizen who works properly and respects laws,
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, you deserve your freedom and your earned respect.
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, if you are not doing obey
this
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system, and
then
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you deserve your
punishment
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. In their
opinion
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,
this
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is the proper system to conserve the equilibrium of the
community
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.
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, there is
large group
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a large group
of people who refuse
this
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theory. They defend what they call "the judgment with the eye of mercy". In their scenario, the judge should make his mind in depends on the circumstances and the given conditions.
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; if we have two women,
both
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of them are thieves,
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, one of them has an extremely bad financial state, while the other woman is wealthy and doesn’t have
excuse
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an excuse
to do what she did, How we should give
both
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of them the same
punishment
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?. No doubt that would be injustice. With respect to the
both
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of these groups, in my
opinion
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, the right decision lies between
both
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of them. By being more flexible and human, we could decrease the existence of the criminals without needs for harsh
punishment
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and laws. Training the
conscious
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consciousness
of the human, in order to be his/her
punishment
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. That's how we could have safer, healthier and happier
community
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.

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