Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime

The laws, Judgment and punishments' strategy
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differs
differ
from country to
any of various alternatives; some other
another
other
, according to country's
community
and religious background. In some Middle Eastern countries, the
punishment
for the robbery is cutting the hand of the thief, regardless, any individual conditions
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.
.
However
, in some European countries, the judge and the juries take into their account the situation and the several conditions before declaring their decree. Which one is right between those two different points of view? The
First
group who
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defends
defend
stating a fixed
punishment
, in spite of, any other conditions. In their
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opinion, this
opinion
this
strict treatment
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aid
aids
to control the order in the
community
and diminish the crimes. They cited their
opinion
by the "law of nature". Since we are children, our elder taught as the idea of the
punishment
and reward. If you
engage in
do
make
your homework, clean your room, and get high scores at school,
then
you deserve your reward,
otherwise
, you should be punished.
This
folk of people
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has
have
the same strategy of thinking. If you are a good citizen who works properly and respects laws,
then
, you deserve your freedom and your earned respect.
On the other hand
, if you are not doing obey
this
system, and
then
you deserve your
punishment
. In their
opinion
,
this
is the proper system to conserve the equilibrium of the
community
.
However
, there is
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a large group
large group
of people who refuse
this
theory. They defend what they call "the judgment with the eye of mercy". In their scenario, the judge should make his mind in depends on the circumstances and the given conditions.
For example
; if we have two women,
both
of them are thieves,
however
, one of them has an extremely bad financial state, while the other woman is wealthy and doesn’t have
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an excuse
excuse
to do what she did, How we should give
both
of them the same
punishment
?. No doubt that would be injustice. With respect to the
both
of these groups, in my
opinion
, the right decision lies between
both
of them. By being more flexible and human, we could decrease the existence of the criminals without needs for harsh
punishment
and laws. Training the
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consciousness
conscious
of the human, in order to be his/her
punishment
. That's how we could have safer, healthier and happier
community
.

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