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Do you think teachers should be evaluated by students.

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Teachers are
nation builder
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a nation builder
nation builders
 due to
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 they evaluate to the pupils so that they can become better citizens
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of
in
 the country.
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, it is a reverse trend that students should be an opportunity to provide
feedback
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 about their tutors. I disagree with the argument and
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 essay will discuss my viewpoint in the upcoming paragraphs. There are numerous reasons to support that pupils should not evaluate their teachers. To illustrate, learners may take revenge. In the class, teachers scold their students many times. So, during the
feedback
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, trainees may give negative information of the teacher.
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, it would help to start the feeling superior among the pupils, When authorities give a chance to learners to give
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As a result
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, learners cannot learn
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in
 an effective way as they have no fear of the trainers.
Further
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 on analysis, teachers would not give better performance in the class. They know that their students would give marks to them and authorities might take a strict action against them. If, the tutors know that they teach well in the
class but
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class, but
 pupils gives a negative
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,
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 they might get demoralized.
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, it
put
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puts
adverse effect
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an adverse effect
 on
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tutor's
 performance. In conclusion, after analysing all the aspects of the given statement, it is not hard to see that accessing to the teachers by the learners is not an appropriate for the trainers, they cannot give their hundred percent through it.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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