Discipline is an ever-increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of the teachers while others think that this is the role of the parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Lack of discipline is one of the major concerns in the present day schools. Some people argue that it is the responsibility of the teachers to inculcate discipline in the kids and some believe
it is
it's
its
the parents who own
this
responsibility. To commence with, because kids spend most of the day time in the schools, it
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is a widespread notion
is widespread notion
that teachers should take care of their behaviour. They can teach the students good habits. As an example, students can be taught to form a line and not to break in, while taking their lunch.
Furthermore
, the schools can be strict, when it comes to complying with the rules.
For example
, schools in India punish the students with punishments
such
as asking them
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to finish
finish
up sounds of the ground etc., for trying to cheat
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on
in
a test or if they have not done their homework.
On the contrary
, some
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
poeple
think that home is the
first
school and parents the
first
teachers
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of
for
a
child
and
hence
, parents play an important role in teaching the
child
to be disciplined.
For instance
, parents can fix the cartoon time, bed time etc., for them to teach them the importance of living a disciplined life.
Secondly
, parents can teach their children, how to interact socially and respect others by setting good examples for them
all the way through
during
duting
house parties etc.
This
would
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help them not
help them in not
to indulge in fights and solve the matters over the conversations. To conclude, I think that inculcating discipline in a
child
is the dual responsibility of the teachers and parents. There are some things
such
as making a queue and waiting for their turn, which can be taught better by teachers and things
such
a respecting others, which should be taught by parents.
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The discipline
Discipline
has a
relatively large in size or number or extent; larger than others of its kind
great
greater
greate
impact on the overall personality of a
child
and
therefore
, should be dealt with care.

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