some people think that robots are very important to humans future development while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society . discuss both views and give your opinion.

Robots
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play
have been playing
plays
an important role in
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everyone's
everyone
everyones
life. Some echelons of society believe that robots are very beneficial for the
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human
human's
humans'
humans
future development
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but others opine that robots are very threaten and put cast an adverse effect on society
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the upcoming paragraphs
upcoming paragraphs
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The prime view is that
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robots can do work in extreme conditions where humans are helpless
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For example
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in tsunami robots are used for the help of folks because in those conditions people do not give help
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Secondly
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robots speed up the production process and are very efficient
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at
in
repetitive and persistent
repetitive
repititive
tasks
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For instance
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leading products that are made in the developed nations like
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Japan
japan
are manufactured
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with
by
the help of intelligent machines
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In spite
Inspite
of
this
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intelligent machines not only beneficial for
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multitudes, but
multitudes but
also
for the business employers because these machines can save the time of mortals as well as reduce the payment of
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
labor
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On the other hand
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why robots are dangerous and have negative effects on society
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Firstly
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robots can increase the rate of unemployment in the future
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be characteristic of
exemplify
examplify
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few robots have already started to teach children at school.
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Others
others
have been working as servants for several families.
Moreover
, if masses used robots for their all works
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then
the health problems will be increased
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They are trying to depend on the robots for works quickly. Most of the time humans give wrong command to the robots
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and it can cause big harms because robots
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do not have
does not have
any feelings as well as it is not self reacted
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It
also
depends upon the commands. According to me, nowadays robots are used in
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every
eveey
field for working. Robots are well trained to do
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work
works
in very attractive ways rather than humans
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For example
, in the harsh environment
such
as south pole and
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rain forests
rainforests
that may be full of
having the qualities or effects of a poison
poisonous
poisons
poisnous
insects
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People
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do not
donot
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work
works
in that
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arena
arenas
because it
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insures
ensures
the lives of mortals. In conclusion
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would like to reiterate that robots have a more positive effect rather than negatives
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The sooner the people
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understand
understands
the pros of artificial machines it is better for them.

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