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The average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What do you think are the causes of this and suggest some remedies to solve this problem.

#weight #people #level #health #fitness #remedies
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Nowadays people
is getting
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are getting
 obese and
also
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 they
loosing
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are loosing
loose
 their body fitness. There are a number of reasons behind
this
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.To commence with the
first
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 reason is,
food
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 habit.People who eat more junk
food
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 is getting
fat
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fatter
 day by day.Fast
food
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 items contain a
lots
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lot
 of spicy ingredients which is not good for health. For an example, those people who eat fast
food
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 items regularly are getting
obesed
excessively fat
obese
abused
obsessed
 slowly.
As a result
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, their weight is increased.They
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
 their proper fitness. Shifting the
second
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 school of thought, modern technology.
For
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In
 which people are getting deactivated.They
depends
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depend
 on the technologies.So that their physical activity is very low.Electronic
gadegt
a device or control that is very useful for a particular job
gadget
 is used by themselves.
As a result
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,
Accept space
,
 activeness is reduced from them.
Thirdly
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, disagree to walk into a short distance.Rich people
are always disagree
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are always disagreeing
have always disagreed
 about to walk.They spend their money for transportation
.
Accept space
.
 A handful remedial measures can be taken.At
first
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, we
must be change
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must change
 our
food
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 habits.A good is good for our health.
On the other hand
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, eating too much fast
food
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 items is dangerous for our health and hearts
also
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.So have to take homemade fresh
food
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.Which contains a
lots
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lot
 of nutrition.Adding another point is, avoid
suger
a white crystalline carbohydrate used as a sweetener and preservative
sugar
sugars
 and oily
food
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. After that
,
Accept space
,
we have to make a good habit
for
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of
 physical exercise. Which will reduce our extra calories.Loosing extra calories means
reduce
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reducing
reduced
 our weight.It is necessary to
doing
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do
be done
 household work by themselves. At
last
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, walking is compulsory for all.Always try to walk away in a short distance. To conclude
this
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, there are some ways that may anyone can easily follow
this
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. By which we can easily reduce our extra weight and may be
fit
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fitted
.

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