15. Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

Youth
start leaving rural areas to settle in
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downtown
downtowns
and developed cities to
put in effect
fulfil
fulfill
their daily life necessities by leaving behind their old
generation
which causes major social problems in both old and new
generation
such
as
depression
, anger and home sickness.
This
essay will examine the causes of the problems and their possible solutions.
Firstly
, the most major problem is the
depression
due to the separation between old and young
generation
. Most of times
youth
want to live with their old parents because they understand it is their responsibility to take care of them, but they could not
go away from a place
leave
live
due to less job opportunities in the rural areas, which forced them to leave the countryside in search of jobs which help to get some capital to
put in effect
fulfil
fulfill
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
them
their
as well as their old
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parents'
parents
daily life
a social unit living together
household
house hold
necessities.
In addition
to above, anger,
a longing to return home
homesickness
home sickness
and loneliness are the major problems raised when
youth
travels to developed cities away from their old
generation
.
This
social problem should be resolved by the Government of the country by providing some sort of financial support to the people living in the rural areas. Government should take necessary actions and should start schemes like loans for
youth
living in
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the countryside
countryside
, which help them to start some small business and can generate some monthly income to
put in effect
fulfil
fulfill
their daily life requirements.
Moreover
,
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the Government
Government
should construct roads, transit bus services and bullet
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train
trains
tracks. These facilities should connect to rural areas across the countryside and by using these services the
youth
from cities can reach to their loved ones regularly, which gives them
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a chance
the chance
chance
to take care of
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the older generation
older generation
an older generation
old
generation
and
this
will make
youth
as well as
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older
old
generation
stable, calm and free from
depression
. To conclude, the social problems
such
as
depression
,
a longing to return home
homesickness
home sickness
, anger and loneliness are raised when
youth
travels to cities and
Suggestion
downtown
downtowns
away from the old
Accept comma addition
people, and
people and
these problems can be resolved by creating more job opportunities in rural areas and by developing rural areas infrastructures.

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