15. Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?
Youth
start leaving rural areas to settle in downtowns
and developed cities to Suggestion
downtown
fulfill
their daily life necessities by leaving behind their old put in effect
fulfil
generation
which causes major social problems in both old and new generation
such
as depression
, anger and home sickness. This
essay will examine the causes of the problems and their possible solutions.
Firstly
, the most major problem is the depression
due to the separation between old and young generation
. Most of times youth
want to live with their old parents because they understand it is their responsibility to take care of them, but they could not live
due to less job opportunities in the rural areas, which forced them to leave the countryside in search of jobs which help to get some capital to go away from a place
leave
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
their
as well as their old reflexive form of "them"
themselves
them
parents
daily life Suggestion
parents'
house hold
necessities. a social unit living together
household
In addition
to above, anger, home sickness
and loneliness are the major problems raised when a longing to return home
homesickness
youth
travels to developed cities away from their old generation
.
This
social problem should be resolved by the Government of the country by providing some sort of financial support to the people living in the rural areas. Government should take necessary actions and should start schemes like loans for youth
living in countryside
, which help them to start some small business and can generate some monthly income to Suggestion
the countryside
fulfill
their daily life requirements.
put in effect
fulfil
Moreover
, Government
should construct roads, transit bus services and bullet Suggestion
the Government
trains
tracks. These facilities should connect to rural areas across the countryside and by using these services the Suggestion
train
youth
from cities can reach to their loved ones regularly, which gives them chance
to take care of Suggestion
a chance
the chance
old
Suggestion
the older generation
older generation
an older generation
generation
and this
will make youth
as well as old
Suggestion
older
generation
stable, calm and free from depression
.
To conclude, the social problems such
as depression
, home sickness
, anger and loneliness are raised when a longing to return home
homesickness
youth
travels to cities and downtowns
away from the old Suggestion
downtown
people and
these problems can be resolved by creating more job opportunities in rural areas and by developing rural areas infrastructures.Accept comma addition
people, and
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