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Many modern children spend a great deal of time sitting in front of a television or computer screen. This is extremely harmful to their development. Therefore, parents should strictly limit the time that children spend in this way.

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we
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We
 know nowadays there are a lot of children spend their time
at
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on
computer
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computers
the computer
a computer
,
Accept space
,
also
 we know that the
computer
 and the other stuff of technology they have
two
in the direction of
to
 effect for our children positive and negative its depend
about
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on
 how the
childern
a young person of either sex
children
use
 it
,
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,
 in
this
 article we will know all
this
 thing
.
Accept space
.
First
 at all , when the
computer
 was invented no one accepted the idea and no one believed that the
computer
 can make the whole world like a small village ,
also
 the benefit of the
computer
 you can search whatever you want while you are sitting in your house ,
also
 some childern
use
 it for study and talk with their teacher if they have a problem or if they didn’t understand the lesson in the class While the other way to
use
 the
computer
 its called the bad way , because if you do not control your childern and do not teach them how to
use
 the
computer
 and how long they should stay at the
computer
 they will had more problem ,
such
 as a eyes problem and they will be alone without a friend only a
computer
 friend In my opinion im neutral , because it doesnot matter how often the children spend thier time in on the internet but the important thing if they
use
 it in the best way . To sum up everything thing in the whole world can by bad or good it depbend how people
use
 it ,
also
 how the parent control their children and teach them how to
use
 the
computer
 and get a lot of benefit from it

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