Many modern children spend a great deal of time sitting in front of a television or computer screen. This is extremely harmful to their development. Therefore, parents should strictly limit the time that children spend in this way.

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We
we
know nowadays there are a lot of children spend their time
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on
at
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computers
the computer
a computer
computer
Accept space
,
,
also
we know that the
computer
and the other stuff of technology they have
in the direction of
to
two
effect for our children positive and negative its depend
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on
about
how the
a young person of either sex
children
childern
use
it
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,
,
in
this
article we will know all
this
thing
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.
.
First
at all , when the
computer
was invented no one accepted the idea and no one believed that the
computer
can make the whole world like a small village ,
also
the benefit of the
computer
you can search whatever you want while you are sitting in your house ,
also
some childern
use
it for study and talk with their teacher if they have a problem or if they didn’t understand the lesson in the class While the other way to
use
the
computer
its called the bad way , because if you do not control your childern and do not teach them how to
use
the
computer
and how long they should stay at the
computer
they will had more problem ,
such
as a eyes problem and they will be alone without a friend only a
computer
friend In my opinion im neutral , because it doesnot matter how often the children spend thier time in on the internet but the important thing if they
use
it in the best way . To sum up everything thing in the whole world can by bad or good it depbend how people
use
it ,
also
how the parent control their children and teach them how to
use
the
computer
and get a lot of benefit from it

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