The chart below show the result of a survey of adult education. The fist chart shows the reasons why adult decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information show below.

According to a recent survey of adult education, there are seven reasons about why adults decide to study, where “interest in subject” is the option that have more answers with 40%.
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with 20%, to able to change Jobs with 12%, and the
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