There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

If
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you question me
you question to me
“what
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you cannot live
cannot you live
with?”
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Possibility
possibility
I answer you with
music
, because I think
that is
the best company for any person in the world. The
music
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serves
serve
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to
for
share, dance and sing. When we heard
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the music
music
change our emotions and mood, we can be happy or sad, but
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the truth
the true
is that
this
kind of art is not
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indifferent
indiference
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to
for
anyone. So for
this
listen
music
is very
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necessary
unnecessary
neccesary
. In the world exist a lot of
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sorts, of
sorts of
sort of
music
: rock, pop, country,
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rejection
regueaton
, but there are bands more popular than
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another
other
one. The consequence of
that is
not good, because the people lost their identity, because they don’t
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hear
heard
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the music
music
of their country. The identity is what
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defines
define
a place, if we don’t have
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an identity
identity
, we
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don’t exist
haven’t existed
don’t exists
. So it
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is necessary, keeping
is necessary keeping
is necessary keep
the traditions, or we will not be nothing. In the
last
time in Chile, there is a law that demand
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puts
put
a
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percent
porcent
of national
music
in the radio. I think that idea is good, because we are doing strong our local
music
for new generations. As well the people can find international
music
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on
in
the internet or other places,
this
law is the begin of the love our traditions.

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