The chart below show the result of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adults education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.

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The summary of a survey on adult

education

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is presented in the 2 charts. The bar chart summarizes the factors that caused adults to continue their

education

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while

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the pie chart shows the public opinion regarding the

cost sharing

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for adult

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According to

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the bar chart, 40% of the respondents mentioned “interest in the subject” as the reason they decided to go back to school.

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factor was followed closely by the aim to gain

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at 38%.

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, only 9% of the survey participants said that they went to school in order to meet more people.

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is the least popular reason among the 7 given. Regarding

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, people are of the opinion that the majority of fees should be covered by the individual (40%),

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35% of them believe that

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helping hand. Taxpayers,

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, are only expected to contribute 25% to adult

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. In summary, the survey showed a mixed

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regarding the reasons and

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for

adults

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education

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words education with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

175 words

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