The charts below show the number of French adults whose parents spoke a French regional language to them when they were children and the number who speak a French regional language to their own children

.The bar graphs provide information on how many children were spoken to in a French regional language and
carried on
tradition when they in turn became parents. 600,000 children were often spoken to in Alsatian and
while about a half of
number habitually heard Breton. 100,000 adults were frequently spoken to in Creole and slightly less in Corsican.
was occasionally spoken to over 1 million adults in their childhood, while only 400,000 were spoken to in Breton. The numbers that communicated occasionally using Creole and Corsican ranged between 100,000 and 120,000.
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Lastly, those
those whose parents occasionally spoke Alsatian to them stood at 230,000. Keeping with the trend of passing on a French regional language to their children, 400,000 adults spoke Alsatian to their children and 250,000 communicated in
. The remaining three regional languages were not spoken as much. Less than 100,000 adults used them to speak to their children.
, Alsatian and
were habitually used by French adults to speak to their children and
was spoken occasionally to a greater extent than Alsatian, those who heard Alsatian in their childhood were more likely to speak it to their own children.
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