Some people believe that women should be treated as equal to men when applying for a job with police or the military. Others think women are less suitable for this kind of job. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some individuals think that women should be considered as suitable as men in the military or
police
when they are applying for job opportunities, others argue that women are not efficient enough for
this
kind of jobs. Considering the safety of women offenders,
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I
i
believe the military or
police
needs women forces as much as they need men forces. On the one hand, women
police
are needed in some cases
such
as women jails or handling women criminals. Many criminal cases included women offenders; to handle these people it might be better for their safety to use women
police
officers. More specifically, if we give all the jobs related to keeping women offenders in jails
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two
to
men, we might increase the risk of sexual
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harassment
harrashment
from men
police
officers.
For example
, by replacing the men
police
forces with the
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women
women's
womens
officers, USA has decreased the amount of sexual
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harassment
harrashment
in jails to the half in the
last
decade.
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On
on
the other hand, bearing the
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difficulties
difficulities
in some conditions
such
as war places might be harder for women as their nature are more sentimental. Some conditions
such
as seeing people's death are hard for both men and women. But, women might conflict more with
this
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situation
situations
, and
this
might lead to some mental health problems. Take
last
report of depression rates among US soldiers as an example, the number of women force got depression was far higher than men. To conclude,
however
, some people believe that women are not suitable enough for jobs related to the military or
police
, others think women should be treated same when they are
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being
beeing
hired. I agree with the
second
opinion as using women forces in women jails will decrease a huge number of sexual
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harassment
harrashment
.

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