Some people believe that women should be treated as equal to men when applying for a job with police or the military. Others think women are less suitable for this kind of job. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some individuals think that women should be considered as suitable as men in the military or

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when they are applying for job opportunities, others argue that women are not efficient enough for

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kind of jobs. Considering the safety of women offenders,

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refers to the speaker or writer

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believe the military or

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needs women forces as much as they need men forces. On the one hand, women

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are needed in some cases

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as women jails or handling women criminals. Many criminal cases included women offenders; to handle these people it might be better for their safety to use women

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officers. More specifically, if we give all the jobs related to keeping women offenders in jails

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being one more than one

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men, we might increase the risk of sexual

harrashment

a feeling of intense annoyance caused by being tormented

harassment

from men

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officers.

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, by replacing the men

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forces with the

womens

an adult female person (as opposed to a man)

women

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officers, USA has decreased the amount of sexual

harrashment

a feeling of intense annoyance caused by being tormented

harassment

in jails to the half in the

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decade.

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On

the other hand, bearing the

difficulities

an effort that is inconvenient

difficulties

in some conditions

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as war places might be harder for women as their nature are more sentimental. Some conditions

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as seeing people's death are hard for both men and women. But, women might conflict more with

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situations

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situation

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might lead to some mental health problems. Take

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report of depression rates among US soldiers as an example, the number of women force got depression was far higher than men. To conclude,

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, some people believe that women are not suitable enough for jobs related to the military or

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, others think women should be treated same when they are

beeing

the state or fact of existing

being

hired. I agree with the

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opinion as using women forces in women jails will decrease a huge number of sexual

harrashment

a feeling of intense annoyance caused by being tormented

harassment

.