Nowadays, the mobile phone plays a major role in our lives, which brings many benefits to us but also contains some drawbacks. Both these sides will discussed in this essay.
Generally, the mobile
phone
will certainly bring about a lot of advantages. First
of all, the mobile phone
is considered the quickest means of communication in our daily life, we can contact easily with our friends and our relative wherever by calling or sending messages. Second
, the mobile phone
is also
a means of entertainment for people. We can listen to music and play games on mobile phone
. Moreover
, by using the latest apps for smartphones ,
we can access to the internet to watch Film and check our profile in social networks and update our status wherever we are. Accept space
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, If we have a smartphone in hand, Suggestion
Finally
our
studying becomes more effective introduces an alternative
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a dictionary
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sources
internet
which is useful for studying.
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the internet
On the other hand
, the mobile phone
is also
many disadvantage
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disadvantages
First
, telephone user become to
addicted their mobile to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
phone
if they are too depends on it, moreover
, the ability of human communication is limited if the mobile phone
is more present in some event such
as class meetings, on the bus, in the park…
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phone
without communicating. The use of mobile phones too much will make people take a lot of time ,
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it's
not only influence
on study results, makes Suggestion
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students
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student
also
it is cause
of disease about eyes. Suggestion
the cause
a cause
Final
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Finally
mobile
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a mobile phone
phone
while we are driving because it can lead traffic accidents.
In conclusion, mobile
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the mobile phone
phone
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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