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Cutting down forests is a real environmental threat; yet, this is still happening at a great rate around the world. Why do you think forests are being destroyed? Are there any benefits from the destruction of forests?

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The graph
present
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presents
 the renting and owning
property
 from household in percentage in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Overall, The
tenents
someone who pays rent to use land or a building or a car that is owned by someone else
tenants
 number
take
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takes
has taken
is taking
 the highest portion at just below 80
percent
, while there are just above 20 of
total accomodations
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the total accommodation
total accommodation
.
Yest
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Yeast
, the trend turn upside down in 97 years later.
First
 of all, the tenants, who were the biggest portion in early
of
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in
 the 20th century, are getting richer and the graph
develop
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develops
 a significant
downtrend
a worsening of business or economic activity
downturn
untill
up to, before the time
until
 it
reach
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reaches
 the
lowesst
lowest in rank or importance
lowest
 at around 30
percent
 of the total population. After that
,
Accept space
,
 it
recover
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recovers
 for a bit to 35
percent
 in early of the 21th century.
On the contrary
, these landlords keep losing their
property
 as the number of
property
 owners taking
a
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an
 upward trend and reach its peak at just below 70
percent
 in the
first
 year of the 21th century. In
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 words, it
represent
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represents
 the decline of the elite members in England and Wales Meanwhile, the common people found their equal ground between them as the
property
 owners and the tenants had equally tie in
70s
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the 70s
. In conclusion, England and Wales citizen
has been developing
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have been developing
have developed
 a better life in these hundred
year
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years
 and
finally
 can own the
property
. By
this
 I mean, they are experiencing a good family life as they have their very own house for their family.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • agricultural expansion
  • commercial logging
  • urban sprawl
  • climate change
  • economic activity
  • infrastructure projects
  • sustainable development
  • environmental degradation
  • renewable resources
  • biodiversity loss
  • ecosystems
  • habitat destruction
  • conservation efforts
  • carbon footprint
  • afforestation
  • renewable resources
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