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some organisations believe that their employeea shuld dress smartly. Other value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

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Introduction
In the old days, the clothes indicated the
sophisti
someone whose reasoning is subtle and often specious
sophist
sophistry
.
cation
Suggestion
Cation
 of the
cunor
a place off to the side of an area
corner
oved
at a higher position than
over
Ris
English lyricist who frequently worked with Andrew Lloyd Webber (born in 1944)
Rice
Socal
Suggestion
Social
 stales,
whareby
By or through which
whereby
ppla
a humble request for help from someone in authority
plea
plan
ploy
 used to value
dle
act on verbally or in some form of artistic expression
deal
pacson
a human being
person
poison
cccording
(followed by 'to') in agreement with or accordant with
according
coding
cording
 to fas
clolhas
Suggestion
 and
clistingushad
Suggestion
 for any high position he was in.
However
Linking Words
, there
cencepts
an abstract or general idea inferred or derived from specific instances
concepts
 began to
changa
cause to change; make different; cause a transformation
change
 in ha
twerdy
of textiles; having a rough surface
tweedy
-
First
Linking Words
 Contry, where these aspects
remainad
Suggestion
remain ad
confinad
not invading healthy tissue
confined
toa
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
to
 few who still we in their days that ended.Other
han
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 these Concuts
cae
move toward, travel toward something or somebody or approach something or somebody
came
 from
busine ss men
the body of individuals who manage businesses
businessmen
 and
awnors
(law) someone who owns (is legal possessor of) a business
owners
 of the
highast
greater than normal in degree or intensity or amount
highest
funancial
involving financial matters
financial
reu
the syllable naming the second (supertonic) note of any major scale in solmization
re
enue
the feeling of being bored by something tedious
ennui
en
,
Accept space
,
 where
thap
the upper part of anything
top
tap
waar
the waging of armed conflict against an enemy
war
wear
simpla
Suggestion
Simpla
simple
simply
clathes
clothing in general
clothes
tlat
having a surface without slope, tilt in which no part is higher or lower than another
flat
 don't indicate how
rich thay
Accept comma addition
rich, they
rich they
 are Where in their opinion, the
quolity
an essential and distinguishing attribute of something or someone
quality
equality
qualities
 of your
wanh
clean with some chemical process
wash
wan
wand
 should be
beter
(comparative of 'good') superior to another (of the same class or set or kind) in excellence or quality or desirability or suitability; more highly skilled than another
better
bitter
noh
quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns for indicating a complete or almost complete lack or zero quantity of
no
 outward
appaaranca
outward or visible aspect of a person or thing
appearance
,
Suchas
Suggestion
Such as
 Steue Jbs,
wha
the person or persons that; the one that
who
what
why
 was your
considarad
carefully weighed
considered
 one
dA
time for Earth to make a complete rotation on its axis
day
 the richest
peopla
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
un
Suggestion
in
on
of
won
 the world Where he used to meet
fis
denotes a person or thing
this
employous
put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose
employs
employees
implies
 in his conferences with simple
clobes
a team of professional baseball players who play and travel together
clubs
, he
cicwt
Suggestion
undicute
be a signal for or a symptom of
indicate
indicated
indicates
 that he
uos
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
is
rih
an abstract idea of that which is due to a person or governmental body by law or tradition or nature
right
rich
, bit
rahera
Suggestion
rah-rah
veny
Suggestion
Veny
simpla
Suggestion
Simpla
simple
 Person.
Conclusion
In my
opinien
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
opening
opinions
, a person
emust
be compelled, be necessary, have to, ought to
must
almost
waar
be dressed in
wear
clhes
clothing in general
clothes
thal
Suggestion
Thal
tell
that'll
giue
come into the possession of something concrete or abstract
get
guard
gain
 his position hall values, to
undicate
be a signal for or a symptom of
indicate
undercut
indict
 his
lod
weight to be borne or conveyed
load
lord
Lord
 f hum
ity
the thing named or in question
it
arel
Suggestion
Arel
are
areal
 balance in his
wonh and
Suggestion
one hand
won hand
 denote that he
rus
European strong-scented perennial herb with grey-green bitter-tasting leaves; an irritant similar to poison ivy
rues
rose
 pads every Ring,
oal
Suggestion
Peie
Suggestion
Pie
 I Pind that wearing
cei
perceive by sight or have the power to perceive by sight
see
 casual
clathes
clothing in general
clothes
 is
veny
Suggestion
Veny
veiny
wenderful
extraordinarily good or great; used especially as an intensifier
wonderful
,
Accept space
,
espacially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
 in the workplaces of organizations in the main and
administradive
of or relating to or responsible for administration
administrative
contucs
close interaction
contacts
contact
controls
.
Inthe
Suggestion
In the
 secondary branches
,
Accept space
,
whea
In or at or to what place
where
what
socical
relating to human society and its members
social
 and Reed activities are active, there is a
spocial
unique or specific to a person or thing or category
special
social
spatial
unifom
clothing of distinctive design worn by members of a particular group as a means of identification
uniform
 that gives the
tocthul
constituting the full quantity or extent; complete
total
 Porm to employees and volunteers. In general, I
profer
like better; value more highly
prefer
proffer
preferred
this
Linking Words
typa
a subdivision of a particular kind of thing
type
 of
claking
anything that covers or conceals
cloaking
,
Accept space
,
It
isnet
Suggestion
is net
somuck
Suggestion
so muck
 formal and
nat
negation of a word or group of words
not
neat
taa
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
vauch
look attentively
watch
disrespad
an expression of lack of respect
disrespect
Pul
cause to move by pulling
pull
pool
pole
 in their
outudand
that is going out or leaving
outbound
appeavance
outward or visible aspect of a person or thing
appearance
avd
(often followed by 'for') ardently or excessively desirous
avid
Ovid
dont
do not
don't
 reduce the value
ol
Suggestion
 the place work in.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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