You are a student at a language school in New Zealand studying Business English. Part of the course is a summer work placement programme. Unfortunately, you have just learnt from the school that this programme has now been cancelled. Write a letter to the School Principal. In your letter: state your reason for writing describe the problem and your concerns explain what you would like the Principal to do

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is Lama, I am a student doing Business English and I got an acceptance in the National Bank to do my summer training programme as planned for
requirement was cancelled recently and
that is
why I am writing
, I need to ask for your support regarding my problem.I will try to explain it briefly to avoid wasting your time.
, I started
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2017 when the training course was a must for graduation and I had to look for a place to accept me as a trainer,
, I was informed that
is no longer a requirement.
, I made all my arrangements in order to travel to Dubai and do my work programme.
, I would request your help in considering
summer programme as a graded course, because the company in Dubai will send you directly my evaluation form including my progress tracking.
, I will be waiting for your response as soon as possible.Thanks for your time and effort in advance. Yours sincerely, Lama Jaljouli
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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