increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast-food. it is necessary for Government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Do you agree with it?

The proportion of consuming fast
food
sharply rising day by day.
Thus
, many people face to health problems, to inhibit
it
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its
the governments set a higher to
tax snack
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the tax snack food
food
. I will briefly discuss it supporting by some precaution. In modern life, eating habits have changed to save time. Many people spend
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
much time
on
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at
work, and
at
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in
the evening to make dinner is getting hard after overwork.
That is
to say, fast
food
is a good choice for dinner. Unfortunately, eating too much them is reason of some health problems,
such
as obesity, diabetes mellitus.
For example
, according to a survey which was in a university, approximately 65% of all students have exposed obesity, because of eating unhealthy
food
at all weekdays. Doubtless, too much consuming fast
food
is the main reason of obesity and diabetes. It is clear that health problems are the most significant thing not only individuals,
also
for the governments. To take some solutions governments
need
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needs
to pay more money.
Although
, if these problems do not inhibit immediately, treatment bills are high for all sides. Due to the government should take some precaution to encourage people
healthy
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healthier
eating habits,
however
the most efficiently preventing to set a high
tax
for the fast
food
.
For instance
, there is a pilot project in the capital city of Turkey, homemade foods are
tax
free, so many people prefer choosing them. I strongly agree, the governments should utilize some projects to prevent treatment payment. In conclusion, l
restate
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restates
that the eating habits
has changed
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have changed
in the modern life,
however not
Accept comma addition
however, not
only individuals,
also
the governments be aware about harmful effect of it.
In addition
, the government should take some solution to set
high
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a high tax
tax
to consume
unhealtly
not in or exhibiting good health in body or mind
unhealthy
foods.

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