increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast-food. it is necessary for Government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Do you agree with it?

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The proportion of consuming fast

food

sharply rising day by day.

Thus

, many people face to health problems, to inhibit

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

the governments set a higher to

tax snack

Suggestion

the tax snack food

food

. I will briefly discuss it supporting by some precaution. In modern life, eating habits have changed to save time. Many people spend

to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits

too

much time

Suggestion

work, and

Suggestion

the evening to make dinner is getting hard after overwork.

That is

to say, fast

food

is a good choice for dinner. Unfortunately, eating too much them is reason of some health problems,

such

as obesity, diabetes mellitus.

For example

, according to a survey which was in a university, approximately 65% of all students have exposed obesity, because of eating unhealthy

food

at all weekdays. Doubtless, too much consuming fast

food

is the main reason of obesity and diabetes. It is clear that health problems are the most significant thing not only individuals,

also

for the governments. To take some solutions governments

need

Suggestion

needs

to pay more money.

Although

, if these problems do not inhibit immediately, treatment bills are high for all sides. Due to the government should take some precaution to encourage people

healthy

Suggestion

healthier

eating habits,

however

the most efficiently preventing to set a high

tax

for the fast

food

For instance

, there is a pilot project in the capital city of Turkey, homemade foods are

tax

free, so many people prefer choosing them. I strongly agree, the governments should utilize some projects to prevent treatment payment. In conclusion, l

restate

Suggestion

restates

that the eating habits

has changed

Suggestion

have changed

in the modern life,

however not

Accept comma addition

however, not

only individuals,

also

the governments be aware about harmful effect of it.

In addition

, the government should take some solution to set

high

Suggestion

a high tax

tax

to consume

unhealtly

not in or exhibiting good health in body or mind

unhealthy

foods.

Thu Mar 05 2020

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