The charts show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employer. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the main reasons for
study
among students of different
age
group
from under 26 to over 49 years and the support they have received from employee with same
age
groups. Overall, it can be seen that, there is a gradual decline in
study
for
career
Suggestion
a career
as a purpose while
study
for interest consistently goes up.
First
graph indicates the majority of the people
study
for
career
Suggestion
careers
a career
in their early
age
Accept comma addition
age, although
although
it decreases as
age
group
increases. It is consistently going down till
age
group
of 40-49 where the number of people who
study
for
career
and interest both are same (40%) which is
exactly
Suggestion
exact
half amount of under 26
age
group
. Considering over 49
age
group
, there is a drastic difference of 50% between reasons for
career
and interest.
Second graph
Suggestion
The second graph
A second graph
shows the employer support by providing time off and help with fees, by 5 different
age
groups. As per, observation it is clear that the majority of support (almost 70 %) are provided by young generation which gradually decreases and becomes half of
age
Suggestion
the age group
group
of 30-39
then
it again goes up and reach above 40% at
age
group
of 49.

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