You have a received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing, express concern about the missing card, ask them what they intend to do

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my concern about the missing credit
card
in the envelope that I received. I am Vijaya, who have a business account in your bank with the account number of 567812. I applied for a new credit
card
about two weeks ago. The courier was delivered today, but there was no
card
in it. The package was not in a good condition and was torn at a corner, which might have been the reason for the misplacement. Because it is a credit
card
, I am worried that it can be accessed by anyone effortlessly.
Also
, since
this
card
has an unlimited amount, it worries me that it could be utilized by the person who finds it. I would like to request you to block the
card
immediately and
enquire
inquire about
inquire
about why the envelope was in
such
a poor state. I will raise a request for a new one, kindly approve and
instead
of mailing the new
card
to my address, please send it to the nearest branch so that I could collect it from there. I hope you consider my complaint and take an appropriate action. Yours sincerely, Vijaya

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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