Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think that it is good, while others think it has some disadvantages. Discuss both views.

As for my concern, Online tutorial
class
is very useful to learn anything from the world.
For instance
, I am working in another country like Singapore but fortunately
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have to learn one new programming skill, but the cost is very high
class room
a room in a school where lessons take place
classroom
class
in Singapore.
Therefore i
Accept comma addition
Therefore, I
Therefore I
am going to do join the online
class
which is taking the
class
from India professor. So. I can easily learn the programming skills as well as
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
can save more money in life. If online
class
is not there,
thenthen
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
then then
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have to spend more money for
class room
a room in a school where lessons take place
classroom
training in Singapore
.
Accept space
.
Nowadays Technology
also
increased, so we can
utilized
Suggestion
utilize
the opportunities in our life.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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