More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

The
last
few years have experienced burgeoning growth in the number of animal
species
facing the threat of
extinction
. In my opinion,
this
happens mainly due to hunting and changing environmental conditions. Some measures can be taken to prevent the situation from getting worse.
Firstly
, man hunts animals not only for
food but
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food, but
also
for aesthetic products. Owing to the fact that some animals have commercial value, hunters exploit them.
For instance
, tiger skin is used widely for making mattresses and blankets, and
this
leads to indiscriminate killing and the
extinction
of
this
species
, because people show interest in buying exquisite products.
Although
every animal is not for food, some cuisines include wild endangered ones.
Secondly
, due to human intervention in the previously unexploited areas, climate has changed which makes it difficult for some
species
to survive in their natural habitat.
For example
,
Penguins
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the Penguins
are
in
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on
the endangered list as global warming poses threats to their survival. One way to protect endangered animals is to rehabilitate them in
artificial environment
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an artificial environment
artificial environments
such
as
zoo
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zoos
a zoo
the zoo
. Some animals may have special dietary and environmental needs which are only possible if they are treated separately. Another possible solution is to establish
breeding program
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a breeding program
so that there can be an improvement in the number of younger ones.
Also
, if strict action is taken against those who violate the law and poach
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
,
then
the
extinction
due to human intervention can be avoided. To conclude, a variety of factors
such
as human intervention, excessive poaching and change in climate cause the
extinction
of wildlife. By enacting stringent ant-poaching
laws we
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laws, we
can improve the situation to a great extent. It is
also
important to protect endangered
species
in zoos and dedicated wildlife sanctuaries.

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