The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart provides information about the percentages of divorces in Finland and Sweden between 2011 and 2015. Overall, Sweden experienced a downward trend, while Finland showed an upward trend throughout the period. Both countries’ divorce rates had some fluctuations.
Although
Finland
initially
had a lower
rate
, it
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attracted
Sweden at the end of the period. Sweden’s divorce
rate
was about 45% in 2011, being higher than Finland’s
rate
by approximately 8%.
Then
, it rose to almost fifty percent in 2012.
However
, the figure showed a gradual decrease to about 47% in 2013, and continued to decline steadily to the end of the period, reaching around 45% in 2014 and hitting a low-point of about 37% in 2015. Percentage of divorces in Finland
was
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were
less than 40% in 2011, and it decreased in 2012, when about one
third
of marriages in Finland ended with a divorce (as opposed to almost a half in Sweden).
However
, the figure experienced a steady growth during the
next
two years. It rose to approximately 39% in 2013,
then
increased by around 3% in 2014, and remained steady for the
next
year,
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attracting
tracking
the
rate
of Sweden.

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