some people believe that if is best to accept a bad situation. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

Q some people believe that if is best to accept a bad situation. Others argue that it is better to try and improve
such
situations. From my perspectives, people who think wisely they take all opportunities to improve bad conditions
such
as lack of money and unsatisfactory
job
duties.
However
, there are many people who believe not to take any risk because of fear of loosing that much amount of money too.
This
kind of thinkers
believe
Suggestion
believes
in sticking at
the bad
Suggestion
the worst
situations till they get new experience which could be capable of improving the most personal skills and confidence to get by undergoing bad situations.
This
essay will look at both aspects of
argue
Suggestion
arguing
and will reach to the best conclusion. To talk about accepting bad situation, most of people are wasting their skills and time by not going against the pressurised work polices. For an instance, if an employee has been working for an organization from
last
5 years and still he is not getting all benefits of health and vacation pay, he is wasting
his all skills
Suggestion
all his skills
and endeavours by waiting.
Moreover
, if he tries to get at
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
agency he can surely get with all benefits and more worthy
job
for him.
However
, all people are not brave enough to take the decisions quickly as they might can have responsibilities of their families and afraid
from
Suggestion
of
not getting
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
job
as soon as possible. They still believe in fate and prefer to go with the flow by accepting the current situations. Fear is the main lesion of not going to change the
work place
a place where work is done
workplace
other than
low confidence
Suggestion
the low confidence
which is enough obvious since
this
era is of global competition. If one employee
leave
Suggestion
leaves
the
job
there are numerous options available to the organization for recruitment. I pen down here by stating that people should go
with
Suggestion
to
change to accept challenges if they want to grow in
this
fast pace of
environment
Suggestion
the environment
, but at the same time they
also
should take decision wisely and according to the situation.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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