Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

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they are not able to spend much time with their child’s
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they provide
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of toys to their kid’s so that kid’s can engage with toy’s.
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children can learn faster about many things about their outer world by exploring toy’s themselves.
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kid’s can learn faster
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80% of child’s are fast learner and have demonstrated much creativity during their early age. To discuss
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parents are the
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spend
much time with them due to their busy life.
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kid’s do not learn about the social aspect which is very critical component to learn for their feature.
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they are having much
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understanding
how to collaborate with other friend’s.
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I have seen many kid’s do not share or play with others
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