The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognised as increasing numbers of species come under threat. what can be done to maintain biodiversity?

Protection of Flora and fauna are of utmost importance now because of the dramatic rise in the lives of nature.
there
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There
are many factors which are responsible for
this
cause. In the forthcoming paragraphs, the reasons and prevention measures will be discussed.
there
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There
is no doubt that industries fumes and disposed waste in water have caused the ecosystem imbalance, In
past few years
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the past few years
,
surge
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the surge
a surge
in
global warming level
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the global warming level
and afforestation have made the survival of ocean and land life difficult,
consequently
, harming the vegetation, aquatic as well as terrestrial animals.
For example
, if pollution level was curbed long ago, dodo bird would not have gone extinct. Plastic bags thrown in the ocean are lethal and has killed innumerable fishes and other water life. Most of the human beings are indifferent towards the damaging effects on earth these uncivilised ways are doing. In order to safeguard plants and the endangered species who are vulnerable, strict measures should be taken. Like, felling of trees should be reduced,
in addition
to that people should be educated on the importance of tree plantation. All the factories can be moved far away from the areas where mother nature is not afflicted.
For instance
, a law was passed in
few countries
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a few countries
to move the manufacturing units to keep the sea life and unmitigated penalty was levied on those who flout the rules and regulations.
As a
result drastic
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result, drastic
improvement was noticed, saved
river
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the river
from contamination. To conclude, maintenance of ecological balance is crucial to our planet.
Although
it seems inevitable to completely eradicate the root cause of
this
problem,
however
, its detrimental Impact can surely be subdued by joint endeavours.

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