It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional ways of life will be lost. Its seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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It is predicted that with the

technolgy

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

advancements

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our traditional and cultural ways of living will not sustain in future.

Therefore

, it is a common belief that

technolgy

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

and our cultural value both are

complemantry

of words or propositions so related that each is the negation of the other

complementary

complimentary

to each other. In my opinion

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refers to the speaker or writer

completely disagree with the given statement because

technolgy

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

technologies

can help us a lot to make understand our culture in a better way. To commence with

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first

and foremost reason to go against

given

Suggestion

giving

view is that only technology can broaden the horizon

aboit

(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct

about

how our ancestors were living and bit customs they used to follow. Undoubtedly, parents and grandparents are

also

there to tell us about our old

customs but

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customs, but

depth can only be

understable

onternet

a computer network consisting of a worldwide network of computer networks that use the TCP/IP network protocols to facilitate data transmission and exchange

internet

and other online information

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For instance

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Google contains

history

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a history

the history

of generation from an

anxient

belonging to times long past especially of the historical period before the fall of the Western Roman Empire

ancient

time. By exploring

this

kind of information a person can make changes in

way

Suggestion

the way

ways

of living in a better way.

Finally

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another point to consider is that

technolgy

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

technologies

helps us a chance to make our cultural values popular to others.I

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Variety in linking words

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It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional ways of life will be lost. Its seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Some people believe that success means earning a lot of money. Others believe that success is defined by personal happiness. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some parents think television programmes are good for a child’s development. Some parents disagree. What is your opinion?

You live in a block of flats; your neighbour makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, you should: explain the situation tell him/her how you are effected by this Suggest what you want the landlord to do.

A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?