It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional ways of life will be lost. Its seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is predicted that with the
technolgy
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
advancements
,
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,
our traditional and cultural ways of living will not sustain in future.
Therefore
, it is a common belief that
technolgy
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
and our cultural value both are
complemantry
of words or propositions so related that each is the negation of the other
complementary
complimentary
to each other. In my opinion
,
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
completely disagree with the given statement because
technolgy
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
technologies
can help us a lot to make understand our culture in a better way. To commence with
,
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,
first
and foremost reason to go against
given
Suggestion
giving
view is that only technology can broaden the horizon
aboit
(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct
about
how our ancestors were living and bit customs they used to follow. Undoubtedly, parents and grandparents are
also
there to tell us about our old
customs but
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customs, but
depth can only be
understable
by
onternet
a computer network consisting of a worldwide network of computer networks that use the TCP/IP network protocols to facilitate data transmission and exchange
internet
and other online information
.
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.
For instance
,
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,
Google contains
history
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a history
the history
of generation from an
anxient
belonging to times long past especially of the historical period before the fall of the Western Roman Empire
ancient
time. By exploring
this
kind of information a person can make changes in
way
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the way
ways
of living in a better way.
Finally
,
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,
another point to consider is that
technolgy
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
technologies
helps us a chance to make our cultural values popular to others.I

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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