The chart below show the percentage of fatal accidents by locations in a European country. The survey was conducted in 2000.

The given bar chart provides information on the rural and
urban percentage
Suggestion
the urban percentage
of fatal accidents in a European country in the year 2000. The chart showed that in rural areas, with high speed limits, the intensity of life taking crashes was very high. Speed limit of 30
mph
or less caused around 24℅ fatal accidents, which was the least, followed by 35-40
mph
limit where the mortality caused was about 31℅. In case of 45-50
mph
, the percentage of
death causing
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death, causing
accidents was nearly 50℅.
However
, it soared to 81℅ when the speed limit was 55
mph but
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mph, but
surprisingly, in the case of 60
mph
or more the fatal crash proportion was lesser and at nearly 70℅. The scene in urban areas is almost the opposite, at 30
mph
or less speed, death causing accidents stood at 75℅, whereas at 36-40
mph
it was at 68℅. In case of 45-50
mph
, it was at 52℅ and it shrunk to 18℅ at 55
mph
and
then
it increased to almost 28℅ at 60
mph
or more. The bar chart reveals that
chances
Suggestion
the chances
of mortality were higher at high speed in
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
, contrary to city area where more chances of casualty were noted at lesser speeds.

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