Some people want the government to spend more money for looking life on other planets; however others think that it is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth that the government should be solving. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is considered by some that investing country's wealth to find a living place outside earth is beneficial, while there are others who disbelieve with

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opinion and suggest the authority to spend more public fortune on fixing global issues. In my opinion, spending money in order to look for another planet to live is not the best solution for humanity, while solving problems on earth would be more realistic to lead people into a better life. On the one hand, finding other planets to live is considered to be unrealistic goal and only for the research purpose. Even if

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unrealistic goal happened in the near future, only a few of rich people could afford to live those luxury life on other planets.

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, the majority of the population on earth are still suffering from a lot problems,

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as lack of education, food, health, etc..

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, a United States astronaut which is called NASA have experimented for the

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10 decades. During those periods, not even a single project is considered successful in finding a living place on other planets. That's why, in order to create a better life, the governments need to stop wasting time and money on those projects and start giving out for people in need.

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, a lot of unsolved problems, like global warming, virus, etc., are still haunted earthlings up until today, but it could be resolved if every country stops wasting funds and try to fix the issues.

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situation happened due to the ignorance from the government in many countries. Even though, a lot of countries have already spent billion amount of money, the issues have already spread worldwide and need more determination than before.

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, the authority needs to stop spending unnecessary fund and focusing on other issues. In conclusion, resolving global crisis problems is more beneficial, while searching for a living place in outer space is unrealistic and brings many disadvantages because the amount of cash and time spent on the unsuccessful projects.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

340 words

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Some people want the government to spend more money for looking life on other planets; however others think that it is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth that the government should be solving. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people believe that it is a waste of time ot read read newspapers and watch news on televison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that modern technology has brought people together but other say it has driven us apart. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?