Many people believe that in order to have clean and tidy streets in their neighbourhood, this should be the residents's responsibility; while others think, it shoud be the government's duty. What is your opinion?

There are those who think that protecting surroundings is the responsibility of individuals. While some feel that the
government
has the pivotal duty in
this
. To me, both points need to come together due to their each importances. On the one
hand
, it is not undeniable that conserving the neighbourhood is a matter that everyone should concern about. The reason is, the environment is built by its people, if they want it to be clean and tidy, they have to make efforts to protect it;
otherwise
it will be a mess with the big problems. People seem to think that it does not matter to litter due to not realise the value of the environment. They can create stricter laws to cut down the number of litters, or encourage factories changing their location from urban areas to rural zones for decreasing the damaged effects of the polluted air, so on.
For example
, it could be seen that cleanliness of the surroundings depends on individuals' act.
Therefore
, they need to have an equal responsibility as the
government
On the other
hand
,
government
plays a significant role in sustaining the environment. As an authority,
government
Suggestion
the government
could frame suitable policies that influence positively to people's acts in preserving surroundings.
For example
, it is not an obvious thing for Singapore to become the cleanest nation in the world. With the strict law of environmental protection of
government
(fine up to $1000 for smoking in public places, $300 for littering small items in the
first
time, etc.).
Thus
, each citizen compels to do that as a duty and obligation. With regards to environmental issues, I reckon that the duty of
government
and residents should work
hand
in
hand order to
Suggestion
hand in order to
maintain and preserve our Mother nature as much as possible.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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