Young people are often influenced in their behaviours and situations by others in the same age. This is called "peer pressure". Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages.

It is an undeniable truth that youngsters are encouraged by their friends, parents and teachers,
, they are more influenced by their friends because of their similar ages and understandings.
phenomenon has both pros and cons which I will discuss in
essay. There are myriad advantages of
influence. To initiate with, the knowledge and experience they gain by each others company. To explain it more I would say that, every child needs someone with whom they can share their happiness and sorrows and if, they are their friends they feel more comfortable with them to share anything.
, They can learn an important life skill by encouraging each others like, good communication skills and leadership skills and
helps them in sorting out many difficulties in their life. Despite having many Benefits of peer pressure, it has some limitations too.
To begin
with the adoption of bad habits, If any young child is influenced by the person of his age who smoke and drink, they may
involve in that bad habit.
, Inspiring wealthy people
creates inequality in a person's life.
For instance
, if youngsters are encouraged by rich people there may be a chance that they demand for the expensive gifts from their parents, which they could not afford. To conclude and give my opinion, I would say that, encouragement always provides a platform to do something challenging and interesting and as similar to
if young ones follow others positively it will help them more to grow well.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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